tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post7260097418629189847..comments2024-01-28T12:23:30.132-06:00Comments on Write. Read. Live.: Writing in an Active VoiceCherie Colyerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13205065477147957455noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-24394363269268703652015-12-08T08:52:27.717-06:002015-12-08T08:52:27.717-06:00Very helpful post. :-)
Anna from Elements of Wri...Very helpful post. :-)<br /><br /><a href="http://emaginette.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow"> Anna from Elements of Writing</a>emaginettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324981140248692448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-55798051139342337992015-12-06T23:01:50.331-06:002015-12-06T23:01:50.331-06:00Yay for these fab tips. Thanks.Yay for these fab tips. Thanks.Leslie S. Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17122865337924270039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-48306417398536956112015-12-06T16:30:19.986-06:002015-12-06T16:30:19.986-06:00Jennifer, that's true. Having too many stateme...Jennifer, that's true. Having too many statements like that or having them in the middle of an action scene can be distracting.Cherie Colyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205065477147957455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-33007047459142770472015-12-06T14:45:12.029-06:002015-12-06T14:45:12.029-06:00Great post! Though sometimes my editor helps me se...Great post! Though sometimes my editor helps me see that "He looked my way" is better and less distracting than "His sapphire gaze burned into me." I guess we need to take into account the context (and style).Jennifer Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13300124780126853962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-88045441739265912932015-12-05T17:52:01.662-06:002015-12-05T17:52:01.662-06:00Thanks. :)Thanks. :)Cherie Colyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205065477147957455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-1082044020122304772015-12-05T15:49:46.443-06:002015-12-05T15:49:46.443-06:00Great tips! Active voice definitely keeps readers ...Great tips! Active voice definitely keeps readers in the moment.Nick Wilfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841776353790635132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-76388845061064704452015-12-05T15:42:15.463-06:002015-12-05T15:42:15.463-06:00Good examples! And yes, I read Michael's post....Good examples! And yes, I read Michael's post. Voice needs to be active.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-14618302840216011622015-12-05T06:23:04.286-06:002015-12-05T06:23:04.286-06:00My pleasure, Michael. :)My pleasure, Michael. :)Cherie Colyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13205065477147957455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-58515504821670973652015-12-04T23:02:22.782-06:002015-12-04T23:02:22.782-06:00Thanks for the mention, Cherie, and for posting th...Thanks for the mention, Cherie, and for posting this on your blog. It is so good that I think it is worthy of a bookmark. :DMichael Abayomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07276804685807238328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6255198579479008085.post-75745920784529710592015-12-04T08:29:19.191-06:002015-12-04T08:29:19.191-06:00Very useful and very practical information.
Best ...Very useful and very practical information.<br /><br />Best wishesJoseph Pulikotilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07074346261093541776noreply@blogger.com